There Is A Saying Poem by David Darbyshire

There Is A Saying

Rating: 4.9


They have a saying in France
and there is no need for romance
'Femme qui rit, a moitie
dans ton lit'
'A woman who
laughs is halfway in your bed'
but you might have wished
you made her cry instead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 29 September 2006

Hm....as Esther said, you can take it in a number of ways. Nice poem, Dave. Love, Fran the Fan xx

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 29 September 2006

Very nice David... Tres Bon!

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Esther Leclerc 27 April 2006

Absolutely love this; can take it in a number of ways, that last line... The French are smart in some things, mais oui!

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Patricia Gale 27 April 2006

Ok, remind me not to laugh.... lol...oops! Patricia

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