David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

There Is A Saying - Poem by David Darbyshire

They have a saying in France
and there is no need for romance
'Femme qui rit, a moitie
dans ton lit'
'A woman who
laughs is halfway in your bed'
but you might have wished
you made her cry instead.

Comments about There Is A Saying by David Darbyshire

  • (9/29/2006 7:24:00 PM)

    Hm....as Esther said, you can take it in a number of ways. Nice poem, Dave.

    Love, Fran the Fan xx
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  • (9/29/2006 6:31:00 AM)

    Very nice David... Tres Bon! (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2006 9:27:00 AM)

    Absolutely love this; can take it in a number of ways, that last line... The French are smart in some things, mais oui! (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2006 9:01:00 AM)

    Ok, remind me not to laugh.... lol...oops!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 27, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 1, 2006

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