Tuesday, November 5, 2013

These Eyes Still Meet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Times lessons are tough
Both eyes can not always be opened
Some eyes, may... never open
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Lyn Paul
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Patricia Grantham 21 November 2013

The eyes have it dear Lyn. The eyes are the very windows to the soul. They are the light to the body. It may grow dull and dim but the heart still lights it up through time. Like it.

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Valsa George 12 November 2013

Eyes often speak the language of love! Once it is lost, the eyes will no longer shine! Enjoyed reading and hope that the eyes will continue to shine!

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Danny Draper 11 November 2013

Change is so often uncomfortable for the players and the awkward meetings thereafter. Well considered in this piece.

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Dinesan Madathil 10 November 2013

Remarkable! A poem that echos with its optimistic note and appeal. A poem of the kind, dear Madam Lyn.

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Sandra Feldman 10 November 2013

So much is said, so much expressed With looks of Love that say it best. I think that is what you so beautifully and warmly expressed in this touching and lovely Poem, Lyn.

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David Wood 09 November 2013

Before you make love with your eyes you have to make love with your heart. Lovely poem Lyn

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 November 2013

the eyes that don't anymore shine, still shine in love. a most befitting tribute to love...age defying!

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Susan Lacovara 05 November 2013

Stirring, if but a little sad undertone. Lovely in your honest expression. PEACE

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Kanav Justa 05 November 2013

... that was a great emotional poem... loved it

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