These Weirdo's Called My Family Poem by Crystal Pierce

These Weirdo's Called My Family



My family is filled with crazy nuts
and they tend to like to show off their butts!
I don't know how I've lived this long.
I cause because my mind set is strong.

This is my family's twisted game.
That's how everyone knows my name.

Saturday, September 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: family
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 October 2015

I cause because my mind set is strong. ................ i THINK you meant to type guess instead of cause. hmm? - - - - - - - - - - - - - it's not easy knowing when a word is made of one part or two, separated by a space. i've noticed some poets in other countries (which i think were influenced by British English speakers) use two-part words when i would use one part. like 'every one' instead of 'everyone'. you use mind set but i feel mindset is more proper: mindset ˈmīn(d) set/ noun noun: mindset; plural noun: mindsets; noun: mind-set; plural noun: mind-sets the established set of attitudes held by someone. the region seems stuck in a medieval mindset - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - my favorite lines: This is my family's twisted game. That's how everyone knows my name. i'll put this poem into MyPoemList. bri :)

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