sarwar chowdhury

Rookie - 14 Points (Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.)

Things, I Have To Do - Poem by sarwar chowdhury

I have two legs
they are good enough to walk
The people, who loves me, know too,
I can walk miles together
but the day, the sea asked me-
'why you are not walking
on the ways of the earth? '

I answered-
'it is not possible at all
The streets are captured
by fierce creatures
I need fly as birds
My thoughts has been flying
since childhood'

The sea smiled
and told-
'The sky is not free from disturbances
there are falcons and other antagonism.
Let your thoughts fly..
the roads are given to you
You must walk, You must fight with..
You have to clear yourself the roads'

'The sky is not free-'
It is true
I remember
my desires, my thoughts were attacked by.


Comments about Things, I Have To Do by sarwar chowdhury

  • (9/16/2009 2:17:00 PM)


    Nice poem! ! ...Attractive title too! !
    Thanks for sharing.
    Merna.
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  • (8/31/2009 3:14:00 PM)


    'You have to clear yourself the roads'

    I agree with the poet.
    It's nice piece of confidence to ailing heart
    Ten.
    dr. sakti
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  • Mubeen Sadhika (8/20/2009 8:50:00 AM)


    you explain philosophy in practical terms. simply superb. marvelous. (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (12/17/2008 8:17:00 AM)


    very great write....as i am reading i forgot the dialog was written by same person..as if i am listening to some poetic conversation between you and the sea and begun to think both sides...then i realized it's your piece talking..you successfully delivered great thoughts to us about the reality of life...to gain courage on our everyday life...
    which is better to fly or to walk? whatever we will do...we cant escape from hindrances and trials...the road is not safe so with the sky....very true to what is happening now... but we have to go on....fight on what is right....
    i love this write and love to read it again and again....amusing and thoughts provoking....10++++ and my vote....
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  • (11/28/2008 10:06:00 AM)


    Even we dreamed to fly, ,
    But we must kept walk in the earth, , face all, ,
    wow, , very interesting..
    Love it so much, ,

    Naru Kaede, , (^_^)
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  • (11/13/2008 9:56:00 AM)


    wow! ! what great thoughts.................well penned (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2008 11:54:00 PM)


    Very clear thought... (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2008 11:20:00 AM)


    In this poem the way you have described your feelings in such an imaginative manner is really nice. (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2008 9:10:00 PM)


    good poem with strong imagination...you're too imaginary but i want to be like that tooooooooooooo (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (9/17/2008 12:43:00 PM)


    Thoughts are very uncommon but true.No way left where you can be free to walk.
    Every day you give up some walking space to the more able ones.And as such you need fight for your wishes be fulfilled.
    10/10
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  • (8/27/2008 9:56:00 AM)


    this is diffrent ones i read here (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2008 10:31:00 PM)


    Where ever we go thoughts go and obstacles have to be overcome. Sarwar, it's a very intense and insightful poem, it even has a childlike simpicity.10

    Mamta
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  • (8/16/2008 3:43:00 AM)


    a sweet insightful write... walk or fly, challenges in life are meant to be overcome...the poem end brought a smile in me unknowingly...10/10, Sarwar... (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2008 10:34:00 AM)


    'my thoughts have been flying since childhood'....
    beautiful image.....i love this poem
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  • (7/3/2008 1:12:00 AM)


    Do the this wich are not harmful to anybody.....
    to fill the joy in thr mind....whoever we relates...or not...
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  • (6/29/2008 5:24:00 AM)


    Things I have to do
    how very true!

    the emotional turmoil is captured and protrayed in a very lucid manner.
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  • (6/27/2008 12:50:00 PM)


    nice poem. keep composing. good luck and take care (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2008 3:07:00 PM)


    Keep going, let love be infront and behind and in every dirrection

    Love duncan X
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  • (6/22/2008 9:44:00 AM)


    To write poems is all what in your mind and heart... carry on writting poems (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (6/21/2008 10:03:00 AM)


    thnx Yoonoos Peerbocus (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 21, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 21, 2011


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