Things Of Beauty Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Things Of Beauty

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Just some extra flesh, on a shapely mold,
Tips either fluffy, or like a chick's beak,
Catechu color or brownish, on wheatish gold,
Defying gravity, defiantly, so to speak!

Born free, yet cupped and strapped,
Just to be held firm, to catch a glance,
Spring to freedom, when unstrapped,
What a beauty to see, as they dance!

To see is to believe, to touch is to feel,
Things so nice, are there only to ignite,
your strongest urge to touch, to nibble,
The beholder loving every peck and bite.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beauty of freedom!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 21 August 2013

Beauty is always can be found anywhere if you really observe the thing, it can be more profound if you carefully dig the artistry in every view...life a leaf, you can see how shape is so thinly cut, with the vein forming patterns...the colors can be different..even a stone is carved by the air sculptor...we conclude life is beautiful_Soul

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

Very artistic comment. Thank you, @Unwritten Soul!

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 April 2018

Born Free! ! And to agree to the Natural Rules of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

@Edward Kofi Louis, read your poem titled 'Beautiful Sunshine'. It's a nice poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

Thanks for your reading and appreciation. Inspired.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Natural beauty of a thing, person or place is the true beauty.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

True, well said, @Akhtar Jawad Sahib. Thanks for your comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2013

@Ivana Radan-jamnicki, Thanks for your comment. A poet's wandering thoughts, look for beauty!

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Linda Gentle 05 November 2013

Wistful and witty, Khairul! How do you manage to do that, and still not cross any limits of good taste? Wanna learn from you!

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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2013

@Jesse Ellsbury, I am very pleased to see how you looked at my poem. I am truly inspired. They say, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. I say, eyes cannot ignore the beauty of things naturally beautiful, whoever is the beholder.

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