Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Things To Do - Poem by Jacqui Broad

Dance with me, although I can't dance...
Laugh at me, when I'm being a fool...
Teach me, the worth of taking a chance...
Safe me, when I'm drowning in a pool...
Move me, when I'm standing still...
Harmonize, when I'm singing false...
Guide me, according to your will...
Love me, like a passionate waltz...
Embrace me, like you'll never let go...
Kiss me, like you're dying of thirst...
Share with me, everything you know...
Explore me, like I was the first...
Do these things, and you'll find my soul.
Do these things, and I'll jump the wall...


Comments about Things To Do by Jacqui Broad

  • Federico del CorazónFederico del Corazón (12/19/2011 3:43:00 PM)

    true love..... true love come home to me.... this poem calls out its lover in a dream. good poem (Report)Reply

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  • Harindhar Reddy (11/13/2011 3:05:00 PM)

    Without doing all these things, I will jump the wall to reach....? ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) (Report)Reply

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  • Harindhar Reddy (11/13/2011 2:57:00 PM)

    Holymoly! holy-dooly! See this lovely poem of lovely Jacqui. I love these lines as I understood what sort of person you are...

    A splendid girl with simple heart. My heart is drifting, my mind is shifting to reach but where can I go.... ha! ha!

    'Explore me, like I was the first...
    Do these things, and you'll find my soul.
    Do these things, and I'll jump the wall..'

    Anyways A rocking poem! But I am in India, How can do all these things for you... Ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) 10++++ + my breath. is it warm?
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  • Jinal OswalJinal Oswal (10/14/2011 7:13:00 AM)

    Exactly, this is what a human being wants... Some one who will do everything without thinking, expecting, bothering.... Lovely write :) (Report)Reply

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  • Melancholy Man (10/7/2011 7:51:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, well written. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 7, 2011



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