Things To Do Poem by Jacqui Broad

Things To Do

Rating: 5.0


Dance with me, although I can't dance...
Laugh at me, when I'm being a fool...
Teach me, the worth of taking a chance...
Safe me, when I'm drowning in a pool...
Move me, when I'm standing still...
Harmonize, when I'm singing false...
Guide me, according to your will...
Love me, like a passionate waltz...
Embrace me, like you'll never let go...
Kiss me, like you're dying of thirst...
Share with me, everything you know...
Explore me, like I was the first...
Do these things, and you'll find my soul.
Do these things, and I'll jump the wall...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Federico del Corazón 19 December 2011

true love..... true love come home to me.... this poem calls out its lover in a dream. good poem

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Harindhar Reddy 13 November 2011

Without doing all these things, I will jump the wall to reach....? ha! ha! ha! :) :) :)

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Harindhar Reddy 13 November 2011

Holymoly! holy-dooly! See this lovely poem of lovely Jacqui. I love these lines as I understood what sort of person you are... A splendid girl with simple heart. My heart is drifting, my mind is shifting to reach but where can I go.... ha! ha! 'Explore me, like I was the first... Do these things, and you'll find my soul. Do these things, and I'll jump the wall..' Anyways A rocking poem! But I am in India, How can do all these things for you... Ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) 10++++ + my breath. is it warm?

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Jinal Oswal 14 October 2011

Exactly, this is what a human being wants... Some one who will do everything without thinking, expecting, bothering.... Lovely write :)

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Melancholy Man 07 October 2011

Lovely poem, well written.

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