Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Tired - Poem by Jacqui Broad

The lack of sleeping,
Makes me see things that exist.
Let me close my eyes...

Comments about Tired by Jacqui Broad

  • (12/11/2011 7:54:00 AM)

    Jacqui my heart melted like camphor and candle when i read your poetic line ' the lack of sleeping. your poem has sensitive heart like your bosom has!

    Let me pat your shoulder as compliment for writing this poem. I love you if only you write poems like this. Don't take it serious as it is fun time so a stream of smiles from you is the need of the hour! ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) :) reciprocate my smiles right now!
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/7/2011 4:52:00 AM)

    Open the eyes of thy dream
    Where thou shalt see a stream-
    Of love-soakn' thee entirely;
    To reach unto my seven seas! ! !
    If thou wert a mermaid,
    Would see the palace of my love! ! ! !
    And would adorn the glint of my corals
    On thine fascinating fringes! ! ! !
    Forget the tiredness of thy eyes
    And drown into my seas! !
    (((for you Jacquilene) ,
    I like your poem, , well written! ! !
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  • (12/5/2011 11:16:00 AM)

    I know just what your saying here.
    Really like this one. I know what its like to
    Want to sleep. A really great write.
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  • (12/5/2011)

    Yes some things are better not seen...get some rest Miss Broad...ha ha ha! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/4/2011 10:35:00 AM)

    Jac my friend should we warn you to sleep early...now u tired, dont over 'open your eyes' soon you got syndrome nocturnal.. hahaha i am joking have good rest. You should like Anele said below...there! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2011 6:15:00 AM)

    And this here just relaxed my mind very well, nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 4, 2011

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