Thinspiration Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Thinspiration

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I sat down at my desk to write;
I'd had great thoughts from early dawn,
but suddenly I'm not so bright:
the thoughts I'd had all day are gone!

Thinspiration
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The title comes from jamming two words together: THIN and INSPIRATION.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 10 May 2024

Hey, Kim! I chuckled at this one. If you've never read it, check out Billy Collins' poem 'Forgetfulness.' It's the one that got me into Collins. -Glen

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Bri Edwards 25 April 2024

AND, here, I thought the 'hashtags'/topics would be 'failure' and 'weight loss'. Damn! My mind must be 'slipping' as well. ; ( bri

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Belle Wassermeister 22 April 2024

This has happened to me a number of times also. Nice rhymes and meter.

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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