Thirst To Quench Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Thirst To Quench

Rating: 5.0


i oscillate weak in mind
filled with duality and temptations
with unstable will power and strength
indecisive to decide between things

i wish a mind
with power packed immortality
with wisdom and knowledge
which could do wonders
amidst awake or sleep
like to quench my mind
with divine grace
to get a new lease of life

Saturday, February 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: thirst
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
how to quench this thirst
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2016

Which could do wonders! ! ! Accepting the works of the truth. Nice work.

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Paul Sebastian 20 April 2016

Our thirst will not quench until our souls have found rest in oneness with God. Yet He has given each of us an unlimited potential to be extraordinary. Thank you dear.

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Kishore Kumar Das 23 March 2016

the real energy is born out of faith in God...... nice lines...

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Energy that is the life source, thanks for the crisp review

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 22 March 2016

funny, thirst should be alsways

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Is your thirst over? Good try

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