This Adventurous Road To Teardom Poem by Richard Wlodarski

This Adventurous Road To Teardom

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I write this song for you
When you're feeling just blue
In this moment when life is dead
And you know there's nothing ahead

I will see you through morning
In your time of such mourning
I will shed my tears with you
In this time that is damn true

I will hear your cries of pain
And comfort you through the disdain
I will wrap you in the warmth of my touch
Until threshold of pain is just such

I will taste with you this great suffering
And I will make you this one offering
I will sit by the comfort of your side
And take with you this adventurous ride

Sunday, January 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cancer,memoriam,pain,painful,suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 15 May 2017

Touching and beautiful! !

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Thank you for reading and commenting, Siddartha.

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Alison Gaff 13 April 2017

Very touching and sad but our memories make us stronger. Take care

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Richard Wlodarski 14 April 2017

Thank you, Alison for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.

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Elena Sandu 29 January 2017

I often wondered if the pain of those we love could be more bearable when we are near for care and support, I guessed it does. Sometimes might even prolong their lives. Thank you for sharing, moving poem, it touched my soul.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 February 2017

Elena, there are many many lives that have been prolonged for this very reason. And through the power of prayer. And if you're not religious, then on some higher vibration as well. Thank you for your thought provoking feedback. I greatly appreciate that the poem touched your soul.

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Valsa George 22 January 2017

It is so comforting to think that there will be some willing to partake of our joys and sorrows! Most of our friends are fair weather friends who will desert us in times of need. But here is one with the promise to hold our hand and wipe our tears away! How I wish the world had been peopled with such men! Enjoyed this rhyming verse!

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2017

You are most kind, Valsa. I truly appreciate your comments. Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 January 2017

Awesome rhyming and sincere consoling verses in feeling and friendship. Really appealing I'm sure to the one it is addressed to. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again

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Richard Wlodarski 17 January 2017

Thank you so much for your great feedback and kind words. And don't forget that age is a state of mind. You can be 30 and feel like 60. Or you can be 60 and feel like 30!

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