Wednesday, December 10, 2008

This Christmas Eve Comments

Rating: 5.0

The truth is so bitter,
it people don’t like;
conscience is muffled,
artifice holds the mike.
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C. P. Sharma
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Mamta Agarwal 22 December 2008

Very good message here. time to reflect on our priorities and look within for all his terror which has grippied mankind. compassion, equanimity are the need of the hour- xmas a good time to reflect.10 Mamta

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 17 December 2008

equality, harmony and peace seems lost somewhere with these with the gun trotting merceneries loose on street each one educate one for patience and tolerance find happiness and goodness in everything we see not to hate anyone with the dropp of hat.........nice to read

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 December 2008

Masterly exposition. Beautiful lines.....Thanks for sharing Sir.

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Chitra - 12 December 2008

A worthy message sent out through these words effusing the true essence of christmas. Thank you for sharing and reminding sir

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 December 2008

let not plastic money its false ego inflate; like a house of cards, it will crumble under its weight.............. . wonderful piece of inspirational poetry, that exalts the mind unleashing from dark shadow, yet aesthetically curved by the skillful articulation of wisdom, yet with ingenious eloquence, well penned,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Jerry Hughes 10 December 2008

Well put together if a bit wordy...

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Sandra Fowler 10 December 2008

Classic C.P. Sharma. Your message is wise, strong, and lyrical. Wishing you a very spiritual Christmas Eve, my poet friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 December 2008

thoughtful composition! Fine rhyme and rhythm! 10+

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C.R. Clark 10 December 2008

I like this poem. It seems to me appropriate to what the season should be.While the giving and receiving of gifts is pleasant and appropriate, as well, I think it often overshadows the real meaning of Christmas. Thanks for the invitation, my friend and I hope you have a happy holiday season. Richard

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Lynda Robson 10 December 2008

A very good flow to this CP and I think so many of us have forgotten the menaing of Christmas, thanks for writing this, 10 Lynda xx

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 December 2008

Hello CP and thanks for the reccommendation to visit your new poem. I enjoyed and agree, Loyd By the way I have placed two items on Youtube under loydtaylor1 if you get a chance to watch. Merry Christmas, Loyd

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Anjali Sinha 10 December 2008

Very true, we have all these false egos of wealth, beauty and knowledge. Its high time we sit and deliberate on equality, brotherhood of man, love and peace. Let us shed these egos and see the truth---for we are dust and unto dust we shall return. A great eyeopener from you dear CPS A+++++and 10++++++from me. Ill take your piece to my fav. list regards Anjali

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