This Great Outdoors Poem by Ernestine Northover

This Great Outdoors

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Standing on an old wooden bridge,
I look upwards towards a hilly ridge,
Where trees of every shade of green,
Hug the sides of a deep ravine,
And gentle paths are found, between
Bushes and shrubs, where they convene,
And one can happily walk for miles,
Past so many wild creatures domiciles.

Whilst scanning the river bed below,
Watching a meandering, peaceful flow
Of water, trickling over the weir,
So sweet to drink and oh, so clear.
I study the minnow and stickleback,
Then realise I'm without my anorak,
For I perceive there's a chill in the air,
Of which I've suddenly become aware.

So with an audible sigh, I start to leave,
And my way homewards, I start to weave.
Then just for a moment, I stop and pause,
Marvelling once more at this great outdoors.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Johnson 11 August 2006

The passion with which you describe the great outdoors is as elating as the written word itself. Another field of your expertise. A wonderful Nature piece. Susie.

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Tailor Bell 11 August 2006

gorgeous vision, Ernestine. brilliant hesitation toward the end. love it. -Tailor

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Uriah Hamilton 10 August 2006

Lovely country picture you've drawn.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 August 2006

Just one more glance hey Ernestine, at this heavenly sight, all caught so visually in your eye This is so beautiful Thankyou darling Love duncan X

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R H 10 August 2006

Ernestine, you transported me from the comfort of my chair to the great outdoors and I didn't want to return. A wonderfully visual write. Justine

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