Those Days Without You Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Those Days Without You

Rating: 5.0


We had travelled far,
A weekend away to see my aunt.
It was our first weekend away without my dad,
And i still remember feeling oh so sad.
He waved us off at the station,
The tears ran down my face,
We were leaving our home town without him,
I can still see his smiling face.

After a really long weekend,
It was time to head for home,
We had no forms of communication,
No trendy mobile phones,
For this was a time in the sixties,
When life then was basic but good,
As we walked up from the station,
There on the hill he stood.

That feeling of love exploded,
I ran to his strong loving arms,
That feeling of love will stay with me,
That memory forever lives on.





Jayne Louise Davies

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In memory of my lovely Dad x A memory that will stay with me for the rest of my life x
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emmanuel Katto 27 September 2023

Something really different...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2023

A great memory. So deeply touching.

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Jayne Louise Davies 27 September 2023

Thank you Rose Marie : ) I appreciate your lovely comments x

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Kevin Hulme 24 September 2023

Yes, I still miss my Father with every day. But we have good memories don't we.

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D.N. Rebb 24 September 2023

Congrats on POD. Such a great memory visit. And yes, life was better without cell phones.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 August 2023

Very good and well written memory.

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 September 2023

Thanks all for your comment : ) Much appreciated x

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