Those Days Without You Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Those Days Without You

Rating: 5.0


We had travelled far,
A weekend away to see my aunt.
It was our first weekend away without my dad,
And i still remember feeling oh so sad.
He waved us off at the station,
The tears ran down my face,
We were leaving our home town without him,
I can still see his smiling face.

After a really long weekend,
It was time to head for home,
We had no forms of communication,
No trendy mobile phones,
For this was a time in the sixties,
When life then was basic but good,
As we walked up from the station,
There on the hill he stood.

That feeling of love exploded,
I ran to his strong loving arms,
That feeling of love will stay with me,
That memory forever lives on.





Jayne Louise Davies

Sunday, August 20, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: dad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In memory of my lovely Dad x A memory that will stay with me for the rest of my life x
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emmanuel Katto 27 September 2023

Something really different...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2023

A great memory. So deeply touching.

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Jayne Louise Davies 27 September 2023

Thank you Rose Marie : ) I appreciate your lovely comments x

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Kevin Hulme 24 September 2023

Yes, I still miss my Father with every day. But we have good memories don't we.

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D.N. Rebb 24 September 2023

Congrats on POD. Such a great memory visit. And yes, life was better without cell phones.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 August 2023

Very good and well written memory.

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 September 2023

Thanks all for your comment : ) Much appreciated x

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