Those Eyes Comments

eyes...the mirror of the mind......nicely expressed..

Love the petal metaphor and the eyes which reach our souls with such delicacy, which is so aptly revealed by your style. It's a very good poem indeed. I shall look at some of your other poems soon. i must say the two I've read today inspire me to want to hear more. Regards tom Billsborough .

Your eyes in petals// dancing and dreaming //between the chirps of birds in fronds//your eyes swollen with rain //have hidden dark clouds.// //Their blink love's indelible stain //in my aching heart.[? ]

Spoken from the heart...the greatest gift that a love poem can be. This is a wonderful work.

Eyes speak true love, perfect 10

Eyes are made up of petals where love comes in dream. Very interesting and amazing sharing.10