Those Mesmerizing Eyes Poem by Amitava Sur

Those Mesmerizing Eyes

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Those two eyes' magnetic and beckoning gesture
Are so mesmerizing with their opulence and glitter.
They seem to be two shining beads of morning dew
Glittering with a glaring sheen in the morning sun beam.

I am blinded, shaken and surrendered to them
Those eyes had stolen me and I fell in love with them

I was so content and delighted, having a filling
As if I was walking in air.

O' dear -
I loved you, love you and will love you for ever.

Mesmerizing, those two beautiful eyes-
Are unforgettable for ever! !
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Amitava (1.9.2015) 7-00 am


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Saturday, September 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2015

Perfect depiction. Fantastic expression. Thanks for sharing...... 10

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Amitava Sur 05 September 2015

Thank you for appreciating my poem

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M Asim Nehal 05 September 2015

Superb........Magic of eye well thought..........love it.

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Amitava Sur 05 September 2015

thanks for appreciating the poem

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Valsa George 06 September 2015

Eyes immediately catch our attention if they are lively and beautiful! So much has been written about beautiful eyes! They mirror the sorrow or joy within us. They can communicate the language of love without words! I remember having seen your beloved's photograph! Yes she had such beautiful eyes! Enjoyed the poem Amitava!

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Savita Tyagi 08 September 2015

Another lovely poem from a love filled heart.

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Liza Sudina 08 September 2015

I rarely feel such love - and envy you a little! Nice poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2015

Love touches the heart. Nice work.

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David Wood 07 September 2015

A truly awesome poem, magnetic just like those eyes. I agree with Valsa below eyes say so much without the use of words. Beautiful poem.....10

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Daniel Brick 07 September 2015

Yes, I've been there too - Your poem brings it back to my mind - She was Lebanese in background, dark hair and dark eyes, and she made me think I was walking on air currents for about three weeks and then she grounded me for reasons she never explained - WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS she said as if that was a possibility!

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