Those two eyes' magnetic and beckoning gesture
Are so mesmerizing with their opulence and glitter.
They seem to be two shining beads of morning dew
Glittering with a glaring sheen in the morning sun beam.
I am blinded, shaken and surrendered to them
Those eyes had stolen me and I fell in love with them
I was so content and delighted, having a filling
As if I was walking in air.
O' dear -
I loved you, love you and will love you for ever.
Mesmerizing, those two beautiful eyes-
Are unforgettable for ever! !
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Amitava (1.9.2015) 7-00 am
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Eyes immediately catch our attention if they are lively and beautiful! So much has been written about beautiful eyes! They mirror the sorrow or joy within us. They can communicate the language of love without words! I remember having seen your beloved's photograph! Yes she had such beautiful eyes! Enjoyed the poem Amitava!
A truly awesome poem, magnetic just like those eyes. I agree with Valsa below eyes say so much without the use of words. Beautiful poem.....10
Yes, I've been there too - Your poem brings it back to my mind - She was Lebanese in background, dark hair and dark eyes, and she made me think I was walking on air currents for about three weeks and then she grounded me for reasons she never explained - WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS she said as if that was a possibility!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Perfect depiction. Fantastic expression. Thanks for sharing...... 10
Thank you for appreciating my poem