Thou Art My Lute Poem by Paul Laurence Dunbar

Thou Art My Lute

Rating: 4.1


Thou art my lute, by thee I sing,--
My being is attuned to thee.
Thou settest all my words a-wing,
And meltest me to melody.

Thou art my life, by thee I live,
From thee proceed the joys I know;
Sweetheart, thy hand has power to give
The meed of love--the cup of woe.

Thou art my love, by thee I lead
My soul the paths of light along,
From vale to vale, from mead to mead,
And home it in the hills of song.

My song, my soul, my life, my all,
Why need I pray or make my plea,
Since my petition cannot fall;
For I 'm already one with thee!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Buckley 30 January 2012

Fantastic rhythm and flow... Wonderful, touching sentiment... How can you people rate this @ 5.5? Duhh!

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 September 2016

With the flute of love! Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 September 2016

A simple yet very profound love song. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Susan Williams 26 September 2016

very straight from the heart

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Seamus O Brian 26 September 2016

thy hand has power to give The meed of love- the cup of woe. The uncomplicated rhythm, nonostentatious vocabulary, and easy, almost natural rhyming belie the deeper beauty of this poem. The words do not get in the way of a sentiment expressed with natural power, like love itself.

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2017

Yes, the lute is a metaphor for his lover, who creates a melody by which his life responds in its own song. Quite a romantic metaphor, actually.

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Manas Taneja 08 March 2017

I love the poem and know that it's a love song, but I have one question. Is the lute being compared to his lover (metaphor) /serving as a substitution for his lover?

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 26 September 2016

Excellent poem. I like it very much.

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Barry Middleton 26 September 2016

A lovely poem of love.

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Paul Laurence Dunbar

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