Thoughts Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


In silence, you are near.
But far away from me, in violence;
But not for you, because of my mind
Nor a person does like me, but you do.
Like a mad man in an asylum
I'm here in this lunatic world,
Addicted by my thoughts.

Friday, September 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: madness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 24 September 2011

Short but very powerful. Good write.

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2011

Having thought will break you from asylum or being a lunatic person...losing a thought is the real thing...So keep this thought to taught your thought to be free to talk of any thought..okay? nice poem and like the thought you have here, just not as asylum hahaha_Unwritten Soul

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Bryce Miller 24 September 2011

This poem is very Awe-Inspiring, its a very good poem if not a short one.

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 September 2011

i adore the idea in which ur expressions impress themselves on for the read..

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Shadow Girl 24 September 2011

I really loved this short but meanigful write...powerful and emotional. -SG

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Wahab Abdul 24 January 2012

what a nice poem is it! it is a very crafty one , i like poem as the protagonist unfold a good weaving net of deeper thoughts...i like the poem 100%.....and give you 10+++++++

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Cannita Melius 22 October 2011

wow that's a really good poem. read it like 3 times already, back to back. you're good. sounds like love to me.

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Marvin Brato 26 September 2011

Profound sentimental thought about melancholy!

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Hans Vr 26 September 2011

our mind is but a tool for our soul...

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Stefanie Fontker 25 September 2011

I really like this one. We are all confined to our own asylum, and everyone is insane in their own way. Beautiful writing.

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