Thoughts Of You #2 Poem by Heather Burns

Thoughts Of You #2

Rating: 5.0


As soft
breezes
blow

Touching
my face
cooling
I feel
you near

In the
sighing
of
leaves

I listen
the
whispers
tug at
my heart

When the
sun breaks
through

Heating
up the
day
I hear
your
laughter

The wind
stirs
parting
my hair

Your
voice
is heard
in the
distance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Beautiful thoughts and its presence is presented in a very lovely way... As usual a Lovely poem from you again, Heather. Loved it.

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Sallam Yassin 16 September 2013

your way of art and passion always sweet like cool breeze of summer you make the hearts believe

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Shahzia Batool 15 September 2013

tender, and gentle write, as is your style of composing poetry...thanks for writing and sharing! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 13 September 2013

When we recalled the memories, it seems like it so real happened and to feel...nice write Heather! , again! ! _Soul

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2013

Voice heard in the distance. Nice feelings expressed.

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Noreen Carden 12 September 2013

Hello Heather wonderful poem its strange how sounds and sights can trigger a memory of someone we love

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