Through The Fields I Went Poem by Julia Klimenova

Through The Fields I Went

Rating: 5.0


Through the fields I went.
Breath of the wind, smell of the earth.
Not a soul in sight.
Barefoot, the grass tickling my feet.
In my palms I held
Beams of the sun, drops of the dew.
Whistled - and my horse
Came from afar, hearing my call.
Centuries have gone by
Since I last rode through the green fields.
Here I am again
Drawn to this land, life after life.
It's my fate. I pray:
Let it remain so.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 12 February 2006

And so it is. Let it be. I enjoy reading this poem. It's a blissful state of wellbeing. Thanks. L

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Max Reif 12 February 2006

utterly pure language, so clean, appropriately, like the sun-drenched, fragrant fields. I like the parallelism of the lines with 2 parts, 'breath...', 'beams...'. And a nice meditation on reincarnation.

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Liliana Negoi 07 April 2006

Lovely poem, Julia dear, I am glad I started reading your creations with this one. I'll try to read all the other works as soon as, but for the beginning I am very much impressed!

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Peter A. Crowther 27 March 2006

This is a beautiful poem like a dream

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Charles Chaim Wax 12 March 2006

to at last become One with the great sweep of Nature nothing beats the thrill more than thrill deep abiding joy that such an event could happen a wonderful poem

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Scarlett Treat 20 February 2006

I smelled the grass as you spoke, and the sense of having been there often before was very strong.

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Ernestine Northover 12 February 2006

A very lovely poem Julia, very well constructed bringing the centuries together. Loved it, loved the read. Love Ernestine XXX

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