Thus Spake My Beloved-01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Thus Spake My Beloved-01

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Like a tiny bud
on a tender twig
I feel safe
in your presence
although for so small
a period in the class.


Like a gentle sunshine
on the grassy meadow
your tender touch
with an aesthetic smell
fill the veins of my soul.



Like the winged cloud
on the blue autumn sky
your look through
my eyes curious and thirsty
charge me and my whole being.



Like a song of river
snaking through the heart's valley
you made my world
so melodious, so harmonious
I love the way you are.

Thus Spake My Beloved-01
Thursday, November 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love,love and friendship,love and life,lovers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
She felt very cosy and comfortable althrough my days with her.
She was pretty beautiful more at her heart and soul than I had felt in her body. On this day of our first dating some 30 years ago, I dedicate this to my beloved, whom I don't want to name for her security reasons.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Embrick 30 November 2017

So beautiful this poem. The beauty of true love lies beneath the skin. A very touching write. Thank you dear poet.

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Lodigiana Poetess 30 November 2017

A beautiful, gentle, sincere, romantic poem and a wonderful expression of your love - thank you for sharing this...10 well deserved! lodigiana

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Lopamudra Kajolika 01 December 2017

Like a song of river snaking through the heart's valley you made my world so melodious, Thanks for so romantic poem shared. 10++++

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 01 December 2017

Like a tiny bud on a tender twig I feel safe in your presence although for so small a period in the class. So beautiful poem.heart touching write.Thank you for shared a thoughtfull poem10+++++++++

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 November 2017

Beautiful expression of love and life... It's a nice poem, in deed. Pallab Chaudhury.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 December 2017

Gentle and beautifully expression of feelings. Loved every verse.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Like the winged cloud on the blue autumn sky your look through my eyes curious and thirsty A great love poem shared. 10+++

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Mayurakshi Ojha 02 December 2017

Like a song of river snaking through the heart's valley you made my world so melodious, Thanks for so romantic poem shared. 10+++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 December 2017

Like a song of river snaking through the heart's valley you made my world so melodious, Thanks for so romantic poem shared. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Like a song of river snaking through the heart's valley you made my world so melodious, Thanks for so romantic poem shared. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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