Time's Oblivion Poem by me poet yeps poet

Time's Oblivion

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Today is someone's
Birthday
a gift of a poem
of his today

Glory and Grief
are relatives

Two of my best poetry
fans and mentors
passed away in sleep
but I don't weep

glory and gory
have short lives only

I too will
a part of history be
soonly
fadingly
till such time

Abide with me

Friday, May 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: memory,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 17 May 2019

I too will a part of history be soonly.... //.... Nice philosophical musing after someone's birthday and passing away of two close friends of the poet. I appreciate this poem because it emits positivity which provides moral strength to the reader. Thanks.

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Thank friend Rajnish ji for ur kindness

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Two of my best poetry fans and mentors passed away in sleep but I don't weep glory and gory have short lives only I too will a part of history be soonly fadingly till such time Abide with me...deep poem with easy language

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you and ur best friend only two r in race speed up ur pace Tagore u must be tc take it not easy the world is sleazy

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C F 19 May 2019

Accurately expressed sentiments, very nice poem. But remember this, you are not alone, we will all be part of the past, but the important thing to ask is did we live according to our own terms and not according to some other's dictates? Please keep on writing, you enliven PoemHunter.com by your presence.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 December 2020

SIR RM JI Thanks so much Sorry for such a delay I did not get your comment till today PH RENEWS HISTORY

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Rajnish Manga 26 May 2019

This is my second visit to the poem. I find it very heart-touching and emotional write. The loss of two dear friends reflects. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 25 May 2019

And through our verse we may sustain the journey. This is a tremendous tribute....to myfavourites...

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 May 2019

Glory and Grief! ! ! ! Ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 24 May 2019

glory and gory have short lives only.........brilliant expression. Thank u for sharing this excellent piece. Anjandev Roy.

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