Time Slow Down Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Time Slow Down

Rating: 5.0


Time wait for me,
I can't keep up,
I feel just like a sitting duck,
Waiting for the curtain to fall,
This life's a pleasure,
I've had a ball!
Time wait for me,
You're going to fast,
These years have flown,
They've skipped on past,
There is so much I need to do,
So much to love,
And see things through.
Hold on a moment,
Give me time,
Just slow down,
This life of mine.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Louise Davies 23 August 2022

Thanks to you all for your kind comments x Much appreciated.

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 20 August 2022

I can relate to this fantastic poem as time slips away for me too, life is going away too fast without slowing down. Kudos! ! ! Plz also read and comment my newest poem titled, 'In and out the lusty nil wedding bells '

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 20 August 2022

Time is fleeting not making the life live fully.Beautiful poem!

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 August 2022

Time does not wait for no one. Keep moving and face the challenges. Nice write.

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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