thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese.
scudding silver sails of cloud elude capture
as the stars look down miffed and mysterious,
can they really predict fate.
sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home
and Venus laughing hearty winks.
so where does love begin?
never in the bright ring of the sun
but in the clandestine night.
Luminous Lunar Glowing Beacon Light thrilling hook lunar images to darkness disc savour luminous glowing beacon night light to lost soul flavour out shine star sparkle twinkle ripple sole neighbour Inspired by the poem 'Ludicrous Is Love' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.
LUDICROUS: so foolish, unreasonable, or out of place as to be amusing; ridiculous. 'it's ludicrous that I have been fined' Similar: absurd ridiculous farcical laughable'
" ...never in the bright ring of the sun but in the clandestine night." That is the showstopper... Beautiful! .. Loved it.. Thanks
thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese.
Paul, I regret that you have departed PH due to not having enough Readers here.: ( bri : )
'clan·des·tine /klanˈdestən, ˈklandəsˌtēn/ adjective kept secret or done secretively, especially because illicit.'
Venus: 'In Roman mythology, Venus is the goddess of love, beauty, fertility, desire, , victory, and prosperity' It is also one of Earth's planets AND a famous female tennis player.
I enjoy the alliteration 'miffed and mysterious', BUT why are the stars MIFFED, for goodness sake? ? ? Hmm?
MIFFED: miffed /mift/ adjective (INFORMAL) ' somewhat annoyed; peeved '
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese' a wonderful juxtaposition of thrilling lunar images to savour