Ludicrous Is Love

Rating: 5.0
thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese.

scudding silver sails of cloud elude capture
as the stars look down miffed and mysterious,
can they really predict fate.

sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home
and Venus laughing hearty winks.
so where does love begin?

never in the bright ring of the sun
but in the clandestine night.
Saturday, August 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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Terry Craddock 09 September 2020
Luminous Lunar Glowing Beacon Light thrilling hook lunar images to darkness disc savour luminous glowing beacon night light to lost soul flavour out shine star sparkle twinkle ripple sole neighbour Inspired by the poem 'Ludicrous Is Love' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.
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Terry Craddock 05 September 2020
'thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese' a wonderful juxtaposition of thrilling lunar images to savour
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Susan Williams 02 September 2020
sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home and Venus laughing hearty winks.- - - oh good images here
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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 August 2020
A well composed piece. Truly splendid.....10+++
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Soran M. H 29 August 2020
the pen is speechless to say any thing about this heart touching masterpiece of work, it is full of fresh poetic imagery and metaphors, no one can create all these fantastic images apart from genuine poet, we are congratulate you for this success attempt; it is mixture of tragedy, wisdom, imagery, idea, rhetoric devices.. 10++ and it deserves to go into my treasure chest, well done
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Soran M. H 29 August 2020
never in the bright ring of the sun but in the clandestine night.
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Soran M. H 29 August 2020
this excellent poem needs a good meditation and a big review..
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Soran M. H 29 August 2020
sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home
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Soran M. H 29 August 2020
thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese.
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Sachidananda Panda 29 August 2020
" ...never in the bright ring of the sun but in the clandestine night." That is the showstopper... Beautiful! .. Loved it.. Thanks
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