The Best Song Hasn't Been Sung.. Poem by Juhaina Shiraz

The Best Song Hasn't Been Sung..

Rating: 4.7

Who wrote the lyrics and where are they?
I enjoy the rhymes, which are like pearls on a necklace.
Every word has its own melody,
just like the waves of the ocean.
Will it find its way to a lover's heart?
Will it comfort and ease the sufferer's pain?

I set each word to music,
like the seven colors of the rainbow.
Oh, I missed something!
These are too loud for human hearing.
Where is the singer's location?
Who is going to learn this song?

The lyrics are too good,
and the rhythm will be fantastic,
making your legs want to dance.
Oh, my thoughts are racing.
Someone should perform this song
with the softest voice she can muster,
like the murmur of heartbeats.

I'm aware that the best song hasn't yet been sung...

Saturday, May 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: heart song,song
Sandra Feldman 07 May 2023

Really lovely song about the fantasies and dream like melodies and thoughts of poetry. Like a waltz, this poem sway its music and thoughts back and forth, taking the reader with it. A very fine composition,5 stars well merited.

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

Thank you Sandra

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S H 08 June 2023

Hearty Congratulation, Juhaina.

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Anjandev Roy 08 June 2023

This is simply outstanding.......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2023

Yea, one needs to explore something that has been unexplored. Many congratulations!

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

Thank you Dillip.

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Poetic Sky 07 June 2023

Tough to make decision, best is not yet come. Your point is valid, there may be many claims but song is unfinished, voice is not found so on and so forth, many excuses.

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

Thank you Poetic Sky

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Rajan T Renganathan 07 June 2023

Fantastic, search for the softest voice is on, like every music composer does. Great lyrics and super song. Congrats for Member's

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

Thank you Rajan

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