Tiny Words Poem by Elena Sandu

Tiny Words

Rating: 5.0


Who am I?
What I am?
..dont really know..
Today right now
I think I feel to be
nothingness or
just a minuscule
dot
Almost invisible
in these immensities
can't see myself..
cannot find me..
but hey! ! guess what? !
other minuscule dot I hope
is out there thousands and
thousands of miles away
this dot, it seems to me,
does
think and wonders.
of my minuscule heart
my thought my doing
Woww! Awww..
Isn't that amazing? !
here I am!
no more lost

These dots:
are never meant to see
or touch..
each are soo far away..
too far
still
soo- close.. sometimes
they stretch a rope
from one to other
become more close
..by closing eyes..
dreaming of
touch smell taste
such a new feel
new spinning dance
new colours
amazingly the world around
transforms
everything
becomes small
reduced to dots
and so
two, three, millions dots
tinny, little.. quietly
just for a second. right
now
transform..
in one..
they grow and grow
what do I see
one very very biig big heart..
these dots..might bring
some drops
of happiness or sadness
what are these dots?
maybe, no more than
tiny little words..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 17 October 2010

I was very moved by this poignant poem. It's honest and introspective and I like how you use the dots to illustrate and connect your thoughts. Very nice poem.

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So tiny yet tangable so small yet significant. A powerful perspective that inspires the mind and satisfies the soul. Well done my friend.

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Daniel Einstein 20 September 2012

this dot, it seems to me, does think and wonders. (this phrase alone drove me to like it, great poem.)

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Khairul Ahsan 18 January 2014

This poem is really awesome, and deserves a full 10/10. The title and the beginning lines are eye catching. 'just a minuscule dot, almost invisible, in these immensities' is indeed a poetic thought. Well done, Elena!

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Valsa George 19 November 2014

Yes, we are all miniscules of dots..... invisible and strewn apart! But there is an invisible connect between one and the other and when all these dots come together, it grows bigger and bigger and produces immense collective energy in the form of thoughts! Great write, Elena!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

these dots..might bring some drops of happiness or sadness what are these dots? maybe, no more than tiny little words.......impressive lines. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Alex Sarich 28 February 2017

true words in poetic form.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 July 2016

Meaning and power of tiny dots outspoken. Great write.

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Howard Savage 08 January 2016

Profound poem of reality, what am I.

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Wonderful worded words. Nice little dots in this creative poem my friend!

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