The minstrel of hearts
with tears behind smiles
the sound of cracks
a life that sucks
desideratum poem stuck
yet on extinction verge
received or written
.. Comments.
Wonderfully penned down, I feel poets vibration and power
Meticulously penned down, I feel poets vibration and power
Meticulously crafted poem with a profound meaning. Inspiring too. Thanks.
A concise and witty verse nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful creation.
superbly written- The minstrel of hearts with tears behind smiles/// its the PH
Nice description and I learned a couple of words in the process. Thank for sharing dear poetess. Sending lots of good wishes.
hearts, tears, smiles, life that sucks.......... beautiful. short and sweet dear poetess. tony
Well said and eloquently written but with a powerful thrill. I love your honesty, Elena! Smiles and love from Sylvia FC
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
To comment on someone's poetry is a gift from the heart. To be able to write such poetry is most deserving of a multitude of comments. Thank you for sharing, Elena.