To A Woman Of No Importance Comments

To me it appears as heat strokes of the teen age, when a women perhaps not so beautiful having dark complexion like an eagle provided a shadow in the restless life, made life easy for sometime and then disappeared from the scene, leaving many memories, some sweet and some sour. Anyway, it's a marvelous poem.

The comparison of an eagle's shadow to the distance between you and this woman around whom you orbit is both brilliant and beautiful. Fantastic poem- -honest, sincere, and a pleasure to read. NOTE: I think you should throw out the last line. It's unnecessary and the line before it is a stronger, much stronger finish..

It is quite an unfortunate 'reality' that the electro-chemical imbalance we call romantic love, corrupts even the most practical and logical of people. It does, however, inspire some wonderful writing, especially in the sense of catharsis. In this is the beginning of the end. Perhaps it is just the end of the beginning.