Neither I asked from the moon nor from the stars
But I requested Your thoughts to stay the whole night
How this darkness scares me and How the night plays its games
When I asked loneliness to accompany and lights to stay away
That wintry evening left me alone and got frightened
When it saw my burning desire to meet my love
Now even night comes and sits quietly with us
To listen to my complete love story
Very well thought and written I liked it.
English ghazal of the month. thanks for sharing it.
Yes the night sits quietly to listen, thank u poet.
A fine ghazal my friend! Thanks for posting
Neither moon nor stars but kind love has bloomed in mind and stayed for the whole night. Out of imagination love has written new song. After evening desire to meet love glowed in amazing way that brought up light of hope. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
This is a fascinating love story which seems one-sided until we look into the images that fill the space between the poet and world around him at night. Dark night, moon and the stars appear to be conspiring 'Now even night comes and sits quietly with us / To listen to my complete love story' so much so that the 'thoughts and a burning desire to meet love' are inert, Thanks for this superb piece of writing.