M. Asim Nehal

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To Live Life Fully - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Dew nuzzles on the petal of a delicate flower
like my dreams hanging on glistening new hopes.
Giving birth to umpteen imaginations,
like soft green moss on the white smooth pebbles.

I am standing like a solitary wild flower against the breeze
Wearing silence of the twilight rain under solid moonbeams
Mysteriously looking for someone to come and pick
In a hope for that crimson flush of one more morning

Oh, winds pick me up and carry me to the river
So that, I may slowly descends over from the hills
And run through the valleys, woods and towns
By filling music of life in my soul to cherish forever

Finally, under the splendor of the starlit sky bare feet
I wish to dance on the shifting sand dunes
Alone with the nature with sounds of silence
Filling the empty space long remained in me.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, loneliness, solitude

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about To Live Life Fully by M. Asim Nehal

  • Rajnish Manga (10/13/2016 6:59:00 AM)


    I am deeply impressed by your inimitable style and beautiful portrayal of nature with full flow of its energy to enrich the life of those who experience the aura all around. Thank you, Asim ji.
    imaginations.... like soft green moss on the white smooth pebbles.
    By filling music of life in my soul to cherish forever
    Finally, under the splendor of the starlit sky bare feet
    I wish to dance on the shifting sand dunes... alone with the nature
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  • Valsa George (9/14/2015 4:57:00 AM)


    Imagination taking a headlong flight! I enjoyed the delightful journey of the little flower over the waves of the river, descending down from the hills and flowing through valleys and dales with music filled in the soul and its enchanting dance! Lovely write Asim! (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 5:34:00 AM)

    Thanks much Madam Valsa.....I appreciate your comments.

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/4/2015 9:46:00 AM)


    A nice description of nature, an amazing poem..............................10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 5:34:00 AM)

    Thank u so much Mr. Jawad.

  • (9/3/2015 12:59:00 PM)


    Outstanding poem, Great imagery, flow and message. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 5:33:00 AM)

    Thanks much Mr. T Rajan.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/3/2015 5:20:00 AM)


    Wonderful imagery. An excellent poem having brilliant phraseology. Thrilling expression about nature. Thanks for sharing. .....10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2015 9:36:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for kind words of appreciation....

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/3/2015 1:18:00 AM)


    An awesome poem on the dependence of human mind over nature... full of marvellous imageries.. you have created fantastic phrases like twilight rain, solid moonbeams.. loved it very much.....10+ (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2015 9:35:00 AM)

    I m happy that u liked it....Thanks much, SN.....

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/3/2015 12:51:00 AM)


    Really empty space is there with us always.. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Thank you.

  • (9/3/2015 12:43:00 AM)


    I like this much. It is poetic; it carries poetic diction and power. You did well to divide this into stanzas so each one of them form a world of itself.

    Here is a good poem and I read it three times to make sure that I understood it for all it has to offer. Well done!

    Keep on writing!

    Luis Estable
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Thank u so much, I am happy you liked it.....Thanks again.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 15, 2015


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