You came, you left
So fast, so swift
Like the lightning
It's here, it's gone
But you will not be forgotten
Because you were the spark
Of intense, intimate friction
Fluid motion, warm union
You're gone to where
We surely will follow
You're free of the cares
Of our imperfect world
You left an emptiness
A longing, a need
You left questions
We'll never answer.
This is so sad and a loving tribute to the child. Its awesome. Thank you so much for sharing :)
You left an emptiness A longing, a need You left questions We'll never answer............ reckless killings of child for the fear of bleak futuere...shame on us..... beautiful write.... i love to give 10..... m male poet.... read mine 'Don't kill me' butterflies around..just augment ur peoms
great write here my friend this reminds me of a poem made by tupac.. brilliantly made.. bravo!
Powerful write Lalay...wonderful read...thank you...Fi...10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so sad...hope you recover for the loss..nice self contemplation write...10