To My Unborn Child Poem by Lalay Allan

To My Unborn Child

Rating: 5.0


You came, you left
So fast, so swift
Like the lightning
It's here, it's gone

But you will not be forgotten
Because you were the spark
Of intense, intimate friction
Fluid motion, warm union

You're gone to where
We surely will follow
You're free of the cares
Of our imperfect world

You left an emptiness
A longing, a need
You left questions
We'll never answer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 09 February 2009

so sad...hope you recover for the loss..nice self contemplation write...10

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ata khan 09 February 2009

yes it is sad, very sad. But as Lalay says, we will follow too.

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ata khan 09 February 2009

yes it is sad, very sad. But as Lalay says, we will follow too.

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Duh Huh 25 June 2009

This is so sad and a loving tribute to the child. Its awesome. Thank you so much for sharing :)

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You left an emptiness A longing, a need You left questions We'll never answer............ reckless killings of child for the fear of bleak futuere...shame on us..... beautiful write.... i love to give 10..... m male poet.... read mine 'Don't kill me' butterflies around..just augment ur peoms

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

great write here my friend this reminds me of a poem made by tupac.. brilliantly made.. bravo!

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Fiona Davidson 25 February 2009

Powerful write Lalay...wonderful read...thank you...Fi...10++

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Christopher Murphy 23 February 2009

Asad delicate read, full of emotion.

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