To You Poem by Passionate flower

To You

Rating: 4.8


What can I say about you now?
I want to describe you but how?
From where should I make the start?
And which is first to be described as part?
Of you and you all in all to me a heart,
You took my heart from the first sight.


Love is a world made of beautiful roses,
Your lips, your hands, your face and nodes,
To give a kiss, to touch me, to look at and understand,
Why time seems to be so long when you are on other land?
Loving you is a gift from God to be felt and sensed,
What an angel O God you to me send!



The dear kiss you give me once,
Still taste it after all this time, hence,
more to imagine you kissing me over and over
and seems to be no one can be better to me as alover
When sunset I remember your black wide eyes,
which seem to be very innocent with no lies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neko Girl 19 March 2012

lovely just truly great :) love tin mouse

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John Knight 17 August 2009

Hi Passionate Flower - Another lovely poem in content and presentation You have a Poets Heart and a Poet Pen! I love the balance. Verse one presents the dilemma of every lover 'I want to describe you but how? '. It is more difficult for Ladies describing a Man than the other way round we can use flowery language and call our ladies Angels etc. However in verse two you throw convention to the winds and produce a perfect tribute that all sensitive and gentle men would love! Beautiful Roses, The sense of touch and kisses and then thanking God for an Angel - I love it. Verse three is the icing on the cake of verse two. The taste of a kiss - remembered - remembered - remembered. Eyes are so important - they are the windows of the soul - and a perfect lover. I have read hundreds of love poems on Poemhunter but this is by far the best - BEAUTIFUL.

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

Such a lovely and sweet written love poem..........Thanks!

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Graham Russell 10 August 2009

what can i say...it was heartfelt and covered much thank you

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Forest T. Jones 10 August 2009

lovely and passionate and charming all at the same time.

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