I want to tell a secret about me
I fell in love with a ghost who i can't see
I saw him once, his eyes were so deep
I could never forget or let my eyes sleep
He was so gentle, handsome and lovely
That what made me love him so strongly
I felt his kisses and touches were so near
The feelings I felt and had were so rare
When he told me that he must depart
I felt my heart broke down apart
Kiss me goodbye so soft, sweet and tender
What made me insist not to forget ever such kiss so splendor
hope you will like it
regards to all
written by me
Hi Passionate Flower - I am honoured to make the first response to this elegant poem. Like the other two this poem is full of fragrant emotion. The first verse has a lovely paradox 'A Ghost who! can't see - I saw him once! ' - LOVELY. We all have a vision in our hearts (especially when we are young!) of the perfect lover. Gentle, handsome, lovely and with perfet kisses which is the sweetest and purest expression of love. When the vision fades it does braek our hearts, but those of us who are older know - that in God's good order of things - the ephemeral vision will soon be relaced by reality. Lovely poem in content, form and language a well earned 10!
Love has the tendency of giving hallucination to a person whom is so passionate to be loved by someone, and that someone could be anybody.Its like a kinda mad rush.
The first kisses and touches have touched your heart and bloomed. It will continue for you as long you have the aesthetic longing and love.
Hello Passionate Flower. I enjoyed this wonderful little love poem. I have been away awhile and wanted to thank you for your great support on my poetry in the past. Happy New Year! Loyd
wow that is truely amazing i know how that is being in love and then the person has to leave i love it and you r an awesome talented writer keep on writing :) love tin mouse
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this... um, where exactly does this poem end? i suspect that you wrote comments in those last 3 lines and not actually part of the poem, but I could be wrong.