Tormented Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Tormented

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That day after his birthday
my mind is tormented
by all those white walls
just like that long stare
cooled to bottles and blicks

so my mind is tormented
by all those long hours
thinking, re-thinking intoxicated
like wooden doors shed
to sit in the paint again, I bet

my mind is tormented
by all those minutes concentrated
like the Boeing's departure
penetrated
my heart is in deep torture
my soul deteriorated

three days have elapsed
since the last rainbow, I detected
up above so many colored impressions
memories coming to the surface,
many tawny reflections
all kinds ofdelightful expressions

darling, my mind is still tormented,
never stories told, no secrets ever unfolded
while driving homewards in silence
quite a sad reminiscence

the rainbow on my right hand
on the horizon
is still a bright colored band
but will soon be oblivion
like this partition....


© Sylvia Frances Chan
28th February 2014
23.55 hrs.p.m.West-European-time
Chilly stormy wind 2 C degrees now

Tormented
Saturday, March 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2019

my mind is tormented by all those minutes concentrated like the Boeing's departure penetrated my heart is in deep torture my soul deteriorated.....touching expression! A beautiful poem.....................10

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Thank you so much for your worthy words, Dillip., and your ardent compliments. You are oft so kindest as to give my poetry an upbeat so loveliest worded. Thank you too for the 10 Most appreciated and stay Blessed, poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Mind is tormented by all those minutes concentrated. Heart is in deep torture and soul is deteriorated. Every sign of fear is amazingly presented in this poem with amazing photograph. Fear provokes thought and we get disturbance in mind due to fear. Still we hope for the bright rainbow and bright colour of light in life. An excellent poem is very well penned...10

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I am so happy to see you visiting my poem site, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, your poetic support means much to me. Thank you so much for the valuable response and the sweet compliment. also for the precious 10 and the precious feedback. God's Blessings for thee and thy beloved spouse.

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