Friday, July 4, 2008

Total Freedom Comments

Rating: 5.0

In absolute oblivion
With nature and the forces of existence
Into play
Thousands years of history
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Original Unknown Girl 04 July 2008

I love the message here and the celestial spin, it's very other-worldly in parts. I remember the lines in song once which said 'Poor is the man whose pleasure depends on the permission of another'... I guess that's where we find our real freedom, to choose what our soul wishes. HG: -) xx

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Estrella Baldemosa 04 July 2008

i have to agree with you when you said that it has to come from within not just merely conforming and imitating, away from the connections or strings, dogma...we have to hear more from you. good write! illuminating...

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Catherine Rica Cosico 04 July 2008

Another great and philosophical piece you have written...The last lines are superb... Let the beauties of paradise Dance in front of you In Total freedom Cate

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Indira Babbellapati 04 July 2008

yes...everything has to come from within...once that happens, do we need god or wise men or saki or the wine...?

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Rema Prasanna 04 July 2008

A philosophical write in length and a meaningful one each line is a chapter from life's vast thesis. Isthere really a produce called total freedom from life? ....... I liked this write for its substance. A very good one..10+ Rema

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