Touched By A Breeze Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Touched By A Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Flowers they grow with beauty,
Love, it remains in the heart,
Memories I hold forever,
If we could go back to the start.

Heaven is where you rest now,
Thinking is what I do,
Never forgetting those good times,
The ones that I shared with you.

Emotions are hard to control now,
For losing you makes me feel sad,
Living is what I must do now,
Mixed with the good and the bad.

Hoping you look down upon me,
Touching my face with a breeze,
Signs your forever near me,
Whispers of love through the trees.

Loving you lasted a lifetime,
Thank you for all that you gave,
Feeling so sad in the moment,
So sorry you could not be saved.

Jayne Louise Davies

Wednesday, March 16, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2022

I whole-heartedly appreciate the psyche of this poem...heaven is where you rest now.

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Jayne Davies 18 March 2022

Thanks to you all for your kind comments x Much appreciated x

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

Touched by your poem….

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

A loss so severe that it affects the heart so gravely! Emotional write.5 *s

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Nabakishore Dash 17 March 2022

A poem of extraordinary memories

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 March 2022

A heartfelt poem, losing someone close to heart is always painful. Hope good old memories will enlighten your present.

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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