Touched By A Breeze Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Touched By A Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Flowers they grow with beauty,
Love, it remains in the heart,
Memories I hold forever,
If we could go back to the start.

Heaven is where you rest now,
Thinking is what I do,
Never forgetting those good times,
The ones that I shared with you.

Emotions are hard to control now,
For losing you makes me feel sad,
Living is what I must do now,
Mixed with the good and the bad.

Hoping you look down upon me,
Touching my face with a breeze,
Signs your forever near me,
Whispers of love through the trees.

Loving you lasted a lifetime,
Thank you for all that you gave,
Feeling so sad in the moment,
So sorry you could not be saved.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2022

I whole-heartedly appreciate the psyche of this poem...heaven is where you rest now.

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Jayne Davies 18 March 2022

Thanks to you all for your kind comments x Much appreciated x

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

Touched by your poem….

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

A loss so severe that it affects the heart so gravely! Emotional write.5 *s

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Nabakishore Dash 17 March 2022

A poem of extraordinary memories

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 March 2022

A heartfelt poem, losing someone close to heart is always painful. Hope good old memories will enlighten your present.

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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