Trance (Tanka) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Trance (Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


wood crackle reddened
sparks rising through flickering
golden flames—in trance
melodic notes divinely
float with the spirit higher

Friday, October 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: meditation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2019

A terrific tanka, dear Ma’am Mihaela.....10++

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Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

Fire Human Soul Comforter evokes so many memories from childhood star eyed mists through decades ageless fires flicker in my inner eyes burns into golden flames Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Trance' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2015

'wood crackle reddened sparks rising through flickering golden flames—in trance melodic notes divinely float with my spirit higher' absolutely loved this, evokes so many memories, from childhood star eyed, through decades ageless, fires flicker in my eyes into golden flames :)

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2015

Indeed, sparks rising through flickering golden flames—in trance.......Divine Tanka....Speechless...100+++

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