Mihaela Pirjol


Trance (Tanka) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

wood crackle reddened
sparks rising through flickering
golden flames — in trance
melodic notes divinely
float with the spirit higher

Topic(s) of this poem: meditation

Form: Tanka


Comments about Trance (Tanka) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Terry Craddock (11/19/2015 4:15:00 PM)


    Fire Human Soul Comforter

    evokes so many memories
    from childhood star eyed mists
    through decades ageless
    fires flicker in my inner eyes
    burns into golden flames


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Trance' by Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
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  • Terry Craddock (11/18/2015 6:50:00 AM)


    'wood crackle reddened
    sparks rising through flickering
    golden flames—in trance
    melodic notes divinely
    float with my spirit higher'

    absolutely loved this, evokes so many memories, from childhood star eyed, through decades ageless, fires flicker in my eyes into golden flames :)
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/30/2015 12:58:00 PM)


    Indeed, sparks rising through flickering
    golden flames—in trance.......Divine Tanka....Speechless...100+++
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 22, 2015


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