Transients Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Transients

Rating: 4.9


When you stay beside
It's spring all around;
My mind flies up
Like a cuckoo in search
Of Mango blooms

When you smile
I remember the moon;
My heart leaps up
From the darkness
To the moonlit skies

When I realise
I am still all alone
I shrink into the hard shell
Of bitter realities
For a rebirth off darkness

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love and beauty are all transient
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 March 2020

Love, beauty and even happiness and sadness are just temporary. Love may fade on certain circumstances. Physical beauty may wither. Happiness and sadness may come and go depending on our state of mind. On the other hand, I concur with great Poetess Valsa 's comments that if we have faith in God, we feel we are in heaven. And contentment is felt. A wonderful poem well conveyed and crafted.

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Thank you very much Rose Mary. If the presence of God is felt with us we feel a kind of ecstacy and in case of its fading we feel dejected and neglected

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Bharati Nayak 23 March 2020

When you smile I remember the moon; My heart leaps up From the darkness To the moonlit skies - - - - - - - - - - - When fear is lurking in every corner of earth in the name of 'corona virus', your poem gives so relief to heart.Thank you for sharing this excellent poem.

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Thank you very much dear poetess. God Almighty has something in his schedule for us. Let us wait and see and hope for the best

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A marvelous poem with crystalline images. The intricacies of life is well depicted and expressed.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 03 March 2021

When you smile I remember the moon; My heart leaps up From the darkness To the moonlit skies. Beautiful poetic lines from your heart dear poet Parameswaran Nair. Thank you very much. tony

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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 December 2020

Love and beauty are transient But they are the truths too. Good poem

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Suresh Kumar Ek 04 September 2020

a poet cannot shrink into a shell

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 March 2020

Poetic beauty at its best, and the hope turning to melancholy of loneliness at the end. Lovely, dear poet

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Thank you dear Sir, I am delighted to read your comments that give me energy and confidence

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