Trapped And Shattered Poem by Baby Blue

Trapped And Shattered



Locked in the madness of confusion and darkness
I strain my eyes
Looking for the slightest shade of light
As my heart crys

Ten years ago i would have said
my life is great
I am in love with the world's best man, but now
No need to escape

But now that im here, lost in this wretched place
Trapped by the dark sky
My world spins and i search for any meaning
You made me die

I died the day you left me.
You took every part of my soul,
You said that we were meant to be,
But now i will never be whole.


written 2-9-09

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I love shattered just wow......great job =)

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 February 2009

I have to tell you Gracie, that the last verse is a masterpiece. I don't think I have ever read a more perfect description of a SHATTERED love. And you made it have flow and rhyme as well. Just wonderful! GW62

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Dislocated Heart 09 February 2009

wow... powerful poem..... I like it tho....

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