Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 183,028 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Travelling Up To You - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dear father of heaven
You know I am travelling
I am travelling up to you
To have a lovable touch.

I am soul you are my daddy
By your touch I shall get
New energy should speak up
I should understand life too.

My vision I spread so far
By your grace I write letter
I am travelling with ambition
I know you will welcome there.

Very fast mind is taking
Stability is gained in mind
Wind too does not able to be
In this competition I see.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, spiritual


Comments about Travelling Up To You by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/3/2015 5:58:00 AM)


    Life should give us hope and direction! Able to meet up the laws of peace. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (12/3/2015 1:07:00 AM)


    Life is a journey and destination is the heaven. Rest is a joy of a few moments. A nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/3/2015 1:02:00 AM)


    Source of all light, source of all energy and source of all life is HE, The Almighty GOD....Very well written poem, as usual..100 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2015



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