Tree Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Tree

Rating: 5.0


I am tree,
But not free
My stem is being;
Cut by forces of modernization
Environmental love,
Sacrificed on altar of commercialization

The gardener who was in love with me
Dates a skyscraper now
The builder gave him a terrace flat
His wife said wow.

It seems all my released oxygen
Went to the woodcutter
Who breathed on me, so that one day;
I could be his slaughter

My roots are competing with
The foundation stone of my neighbor
Who shall get more of the mother earth?
Me or the skyscraper

29 June 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 29 June 2009

good write unfortunately today the skyscapper wins sad

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 July 2009

thoughtful verses penned beautifully! 10+

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 July 2009

Well done and let it grows!

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A clever and though provoking poem and the humor made it for me. 'The gardener who was in love with me dates a skyscraper now! ' And not so happy I liked 'It seems all my released oxygen went to the woodcutter, who breathed on me, so that one day I could be his slaughter'. Great poem thank you Nikunj. 10 love Karin

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Lynn Glover 23 July 2009

a very different type of tree. A very good write. Enjoyed the reading. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 July 2009

very nice theme...great thoughts from you who love nature... nature who offers so much of herself for us... but we take advantage of her gifts and never cared.. great write, , , , , lovelots, maia

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

A moving meaningful poem written in brilliance! ! ! 10+++

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Sandhya S N 10 July 2009

very beautifully penned words on nature abuse regards sandhya

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