I am tree,
But not free
My stem is being;
Cut by forces of modernization
Environmental love,
Sacrificed on altar of commercialization
The gardener who was in love with me
Dates a skyscraper now
The builder gave him a terrace flat
His wife said wow.
It seems all my released oxygen
Went to the woodcutter
Who breathed on me, so that one day;
I could be his slaughter
My roots are competing with
The foundation stone of my neighbor
Who shall get more of the mother earth?
Me or the skyscraper
29 June 2009
A clever and though provoking poem and the humor made it for me. 'The gardener who was in love with me dates a skyscraper now! ' And not so happy I liked 'It seems all my released oxygen went to the woodcutter, who breathed on me, so that one day I could be his slaughter'. Great poem thank you Nikunj. 10 love Karin
a very different type of tree. A very good write. Enjoyed the reading. Thanks for the invite. Lynn
very nice theme...great thoughts from you who love nature... nature who offers so much of herself for us... but we take advantage of her gifts and never cared.. great write, , , , , lovelots, maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good write unfortunately today the skyscapper wins sad