True In Love Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

True In Love

Rating: 5.0


True in Love

Ardent love I see
Not hidden but free.
And I will surely ask
Love that bears a task.
Endurance is the name
A test for truth not game,
Heed to sincerity not shame.

Best love will live
On mistakes can forgive.
Now men fully understand
Innate love can withstand.
Freedom I dare set forth
Accepts real love's worth.
Close your eyes and feel
In your heart you can tell,
On how you and I fit well.

Be honest my dear
And stay close to hear.
Call our hearts to combine
Obedience to love is sublime.
Now is the time for us to indulge
Give ourselves the time to divulge.
Come say to me your heart's desire
Or not if your love I can 't set on fire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 29 October 2013

A very good passionate write indeed. All the pangs eloquently expressed in a love sonnet. True love will last forever. Enjoyed.

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Ramesh Rai 28 October 2013

true love is always mute. love is only to realise. a great write

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Sallam Yassin 27 October 2013

when the lips mute true love hearts for true speak and eyes warm touch of you melt the winter ice off my soul

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Efe Benjamin 25 October 2013

nice poem, enjoyed every line, and rhymes

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 October 2013

Wow super cool rhymin love poem! Enjoyable n nice to read. Tnx.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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