# # True Integration - A Double Etheree Poem Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Good form. Practical thought. Nicely composed. deserves 10++++

I agree with your last lines. Profound write. Kind wishes, Sandra

The structure and the write both had came out wonderfully. Very interesting in layout with meaning theme.

Funny I just read your poem about money now I'm reading this piece. Lets face it the reason politians want integrration is to make their country money. You are right I should be able to go anywhere in the world and say to another person 'You are my brother' full stop no reason given is, is. -10

true words..... nice write! n nice formation too! !

well structured....good diction and thought provoking...thanks for sharing 10+

I love your ending. This is a difficult form that tends to throw grammar to the curb to make it fit, but you do a minimum of that here.

Perfectly chosen words which suit well the double etheree; but would still be a great poem in any other form as well; as it's the ideas which are most palatable.

If all men (and women) agree to be equal, integration will truly last....but let's be realistic, not everyone is a good apple. The ending is what made the poem for me, I don't know all the details about integration though, , , , But what I do know is that the writing style (double etheree, is it?) is fantastic and challenging, so I applaud. Good write.

brilliant thoughts in a brilliant style.. honest and practical theme a tough one 10+++ lovelots, Maia