True Poem Poem by Maryam Khan

True Poem

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I m working on a poem thats so true, I cant show it to anyone.
I could never show it to anyone.
Because it says exactly what I think, and what I think scares me.
Sometimes it pleases me.
Usually it brings misery.
And this poem says exactly what I think.
What I think of myself, what I think of my friends, what I think about my lover.
Parts of it might please them, some of it might scare them.
Some of it might bring misery.
And I dont want to hurt them, I really dont want to hurt them.
Idont want to hurt anybody.
I want everyone to love me.
Still, I keep working on it.
Why do I keep working on it?
Nobody will ever see it.
I keep working on it even though I can never show it to anybody.
I keep working on it even though someone might get hurt.

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 November 2008

Go and write what you feel and show it to the world.You'll feel better soon after.Nice writes Maryam! !

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Colin Jeffery 20 November 2008

The passion created by the Muse at its best

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Aijaz Asif 20 November 2008

an excellent write with deep write whatever you wants to write cause it will sooth your mind, it does to me, whenever im so depresed or hurt i do write my feelings on a piece of paper and it sooths me alot.....keep writting you have a good talent to make readers feel your words and thanks for encouraging comment on my poem 'No Regrets' 10++ rgds Asif

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