True Sprit Of Freedom Poem by Rekha Mandagere

True Sprit Of Freedom

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TRUE SPIRIT OF FREEDOM
Inspiring some one
To live independently
Is a much harder task
And it'snobler
Than providing funds
For hundred dependants
You're not old, sick or helpless
To receive someone's fruits of labour
You better live with
What you have
Than burdening others.

The great spirit of independence
Should run in everyone's heart
To break free from
The shackles of dependence.
It's unfair and unpardonable
To remain ever a creeper
Demanding material comforts from others
Instead, you yourself can become a giant lending tree!
Copyright reserved@Rekha Mandagere

Wednesday, May 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: educational
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Giving is healthier than receiving! Happiness lies in self reliance.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 24 May 2020

Such a nice poem, Rekha M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 April 2020

'you yourself can become a giant lending tree' - not all of us can realize this. Those who cannot, become the 'creepers' as you have said.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 May 2019

It is always better to earn ones own bread instead of becoming a parasite. A nice theme has been elaborated through the thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.

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