Trust Poem by Dan Uriel

Trust

Rating: 4.8


Are you cold? Well tell me, can you believe
Who lives heated in five rooms
Its walls have snowy landscapes
Naked women set apple trees

If you carry charcoal in your basement
A deck of 'Balkans' also unfolds
His burden is our heart, our concern
Taking it on your shoulders is not a fool

The sad thing, don't give up
We cut together for the icy winter
Only spruce springs from the ice
But they are accompanied by faithful companion-hungry

And if they step on our corns now
That our feet swell in our shoes
On you too mult. See, fight for life,
Don't waste your trust

Friday, December 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2020

Congrats! A nice poem on trust in a very interesting manner.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2020

A well penned poem of the day........ Truly exceptional.. Congrats on your featured piece....5 stars *****

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 December 2020

A great poem on trust. each stanza is a gem and very enjoyable. 'If you carry charcoal in your basement A deck of 'Balkans' also unfolds His burden is our heart, our concern Taking it on your shoulders is not a fool..'..are beautiful lines. Congrats

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 December 2020

On you too mult. See, fight for life, Don't waste your trust /// This is beautiful poem on the encouragement of life; the universe is stable with its natural pace and power; we, the humankind, an essential part of this earth; we have a good cycle of birth and death like the cycling seasons; for the losing past we no need to lose our trust or the confidence which leads us to the peaceful goal; congrats for being selected this poem as POD......from me 5******

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2020

If you carry charcoal in your basement A deck of 'Balkans' also unfolds His burden is our heart, our concern Taking it on your shoulders is not a fool A very fine poem conveying trust.. tony

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Mine Idiot 07 December 2020

How i trust U? Whatever! U be ready in 2021

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Congratulations being POD

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 December 2020

A beautiful poem on life in winter and it's effects on many things. Congrats on poem of the day.

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