Try This Country. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Try This Country.

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Which country is this?
Why people are starving here?
Is it that the taxes are excessively high or corruption is letting the people high and dry!

Which country is this?
Why people are rebellious here?
Is it that there is no Law & order or rule is not in harmony with population!

Which country is this?
Why people are living in oneness and have become indifferent to death?
Is it that the leaders are oppressive here or someone is ruling with iron fist?

Which country is this?
Why people so bright leave their country to reside elsewhere?
Is that they don’t get basic amenities or living style is not at par with developed nations?

Whatever be the reasons, no country on the face of earth is ideal place to live,
Why don’t you come to my dreams and reside there,
There humans are like birds, no boundaries, no security check and no crimes
All are living happily in each other's arm, without any arms(ammunitions) .

Sunday, September 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: country,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ari Alsio 15 November 2015

How was it when you become wild pansy can grow walled gardens. Similarly, a man could be free, even if society tries to limit.10++++++++++

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M Asim Nehal 29 November 2015

Thanks much Ari A

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 September 2015

a great poem, really thoughtful............................10

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

I appreciate your comments, thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 September 2015

You have raised so many questions that are genuine and should be dealt with sincerity to give people a good life.Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

Thanks u so much for lovely comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2015

There are problems in every country; however, let us all seek for the truth and live in peace. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

Thanks much, I liked it.

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Liza Sudina 27 September 2015

Patriotism - is tthe wisest feeling in the world. Any place - is good to become saint of loving God! Lovely poem! Why don’t you come to my dreams and reside there,

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M Asim Nehal 27 September 2015

Thanks much, we all are proud of our country despite all odds yet few leave it for the sake of money and good life.

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