Two Innocent Minds Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Two Innocent Minds

Rating: 5.0


Two innocent minds were interacting;
One said to another, do you see those floating clouds
One day I threw some pebbles in the sea
And water started to evaporate and now see the magic
Those clouds forming different shapes with silver lining
White as snow and thick dark black and during the sunset
It becomes amber and orange, soon they will fall by becoming rain.
The other said; look at those mountains, they are straight out
From my canvas and these sitting birds, I made the trees for them, look here and then see there are they not out of my drawing book?
As the darkness started to deepen both returned to their homes, now they wonder who created that sky with those stars and moon!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta S 10 March 2022

What a wonderful poem, this is, I am speechless! ! !

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David Wood 09 March 2022

Excellent poem of clouded minds interacting. The human mind is amazing, it creates works of beauty as well as evil. The mind must be guarded all the time as it wanders far and wide.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 March 2022

this was a joy to read and listen to

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 March 2022

Clouds are like human minds, where thoughts are painted in all hues and shapes and erased, on and off.. excellent poem,5 *s

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