Lil Davis


Trying - Poem by Lil Davis

If you're trying to hurt me, You're doing it perfectly.
If you're trying to make me feel worthless, your job is done.
If you're trying to break my heart, consider it broken.
If you're trying to push me away, I'm gone.
If you're trying to make me hate you, I'm on my way.
If you're trying to be heartless, that's old news.
If you're trying to love me, try harder


Comments about Trying by Lil Davis

  • Daniel Warner (3/8/2012 8:14:00 PM)


    If you're trying to make a good poem you have already accomplished that feat and I hope to see more, too! (Report) Reply

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  • (5/12/2011 8:18:00 AM)


    I love it.. I could completely relate.. amazing write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011


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