Alafe Ramat

Trying To Dream Again

A journey through countless hems of lights, for a thousand years have passed........finally awake under the gaze of a sky so bright..., for a strange new world i sought..., Or do you have one last magic spell that can work? For i still have a stack of believe in that fiery shield you wore....., Tears of the noon spinning jewels off the sun, For it is an empty world without those pleasing yarns,.... Diamond burstling from the cumulus cloud,. For it was raining gems down the earth pond,...... Angels wings swooshing so near, smiling unto a land so dear,. For there lay an innocence ever so rare,.... Once, there lay a paradice in this secret place,. For i am been pulled far across a space........ Bellowing the grey streaks of the dawn, for the first ray of the sun ran past me down....... Aye! Snuggled behind the covers i lay,.....trying to dream again., sliding back into slumber,.trying to find that dream again,..... For a dream full of colour and motion is a voyage through million galaxies! ...

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 23, 2012
Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 25, 2012

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  • Habeeb Kayode YahayaHabeeb Kayode Yahaya (10/18/2012 4:29:00 PM)

    nice poem please try and arrange your poem in lines

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  • Indranil BhaduriIndranil Bhaduri (10/1/2012 7:17:00 AM)

    Fantastic piece of work, Loved it! ! !

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  • Ankit Mittal (8/5/2012 6:53:00 AM)

    Waaaw.... Now isnt that beautiful... :) :)

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  • Hezekiah Toheeb TiamiyuHezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu (8/3/2012)

    Beautiful work, must vote dis.... Bt den again, try arranging your poems in lines, it makes it.... 'like a poem'. ~TT~

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/26/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    Aye! Snuggled behind the covers i lay, .....trying to dream again., sliding back into slumber, .trying to find that dream again, .....

    beautiful..imagery...vivid and one can almost see the rainbow...and so many times we have lay with exactly that cherished fleeting moment...now near now so far....
    loved reading yer lines
    :)

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (7/26/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    A great pleasure to read this poem. Rich in feelings and images.
    Keep writing, Alafe

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (7/26/2012 5:01:00 AM)

    i must like to vote for this beautiful poem.

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  • Sivashanmugam ShanmugamSivashanmugam Shanmugam (7/25/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    ''Sounds like a journey through a surrealistic landscape''.

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  • Iniduo IniduoIniduo Iniduo (7/25/2012 7:40:00 AM)

    Sounds like a journey through a surrealistic landscape. Well done, greetz.

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