saadat tahir

Gold Star - 5,193 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Tsunamis Far Beyond...! - Poem by saadat tahir

Paired delectable lilies,
bob on a placid pond.
Spawning ripples and
tsunamis far beyond...!


Comments about Tsunamis Far Beyond...! by saadat tahir

  • (6/28/2011 7:52:00 PM)

    I love the simplicity of your words here. Good one Sat.

    Shirl :))
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  • Sandra Martyres (7/14/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    A truly profound write Saadat, ripples here could be tsunamis elsewhere..10++ (Report) Reply

  • (7/10/2009 12:49:00 PM)

    Like a trickle can create a tsunami so can a handful of words create a beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2009 11:04:00 AM)

    yes, the small ripples could be tsunamis for others far of.i liked it... (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    Ahhh....I liked that....It's wonderful to express so thoughtfully thru a handful of words...Brishti.....10++ (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2009 3:00:00 AM)

    There are certainly some undercurrents in this poem Saadat. It is deep and meaningful and well crafted. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2009 11:29:00 PM)

    profound composition...ah! what a life these are our strife tsunamis far beyond which stays in the pond...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    beauty of a pond or lake is quite different from others..
    so calm n quiet... disasters r far away 4m dem..
    true write... lovely..
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  • (6/16/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    true..the calm pond seems lifeless...yet with lot of life (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2009 1:35:00 AM)

    sadat, this poems surpasses all, in its meaning, few lines, and the tsunami it has created in my mind.will read it over....and best wishes! .....ritty (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    felt as if i was reading Kahlil Gibran....i the forerunner, and u the shadow gathered at my feet....the gatherer n the gathered!

    your words have a lingering effect, long after they are read and reminisced!

    Peace out!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 29, 2011

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