Paired delectable lilies,
bob on a placid pond.
Spawning ripples and
tsunamis far beyond...!
(Islamabad)
true..the calm pond seems lifeless...yet with lot of life
beauty of a pond or lake is quite different from others.. so calm n quiet... disasters r far away 4m dem.. true write... lovely..
profound composition...ah! what a life these are our strife tsunamis far beyond which stays in the pond...10+++
There are certainly some undercurrents in this poem Saadat. It is deep and meaningful and well crafted. 10 Karin Anderson
I love the simplicity of your words here. Good one Sat. Shirl :))
A truly profound write Saadat, ripples here could be tsunamis elsewhere..10++
Like a trickle can create a tsunami so can a handful of words create a beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing :)
yes, the small ripples could be tsunamis for others far of.i liked it...
Ahhh....I liked that....It's wonderful to express so thoughtfully thru a handful of words...Brishti.....10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
felt as if i was reading Kahlil Gibran....i the forerunner, and u the shadow gathered at my feet....the gatherer n the gathered! your words have a lingering effect, long after they are read and reminisced! Peace out!